Good Bye

June 5, 2010
By MishGirl GOLD, Mason, Ohio
MishGirl GOLD, Mason, Ohio
11 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Sometimes you put walls up not to keep people out, but to see who cares enough to break them down.”
“True friends stab you in the front.”


Best friend,
Where’d you go?
What happened to our friendship?
If it’s something I did,
Tell me.
I’m not mad at you,
I just miss the old you.
The you who I could tell anything to,
Who I trusted with everything inside of me,
Who actually talked to me,
And who acted like they cared about me.

Dear friend,
Do you hate me now?
Do you always wish we’d never met?
I want to know
Straight from you.
I don’t hate you,
Rather I hate who you’ve become.
You’re the one people
Never expected to do this.
Right now,
I’m regretting ever liking you.

Old acquaintance of mine,
Have you heard how much you hurt me?
Have you seen my tears because of you?
I want to say you that you don’t mean anything by it,
But now I’m not so sure.
I’m scared to talk to you because
I don’t know what you’ll say
In return.

Neighbor,
These are my last few words to you.
I want the old you back,
But I know that won’t happen.
So sadly I’m here to say,

Goodbye.
When you decide to reinhabit your body
And want to talk,
I’ll be here.
But until then,
Good bye
My long lost friend.


The author's comments:
My best friend turned into my worst enemy almost over night. So this is for him.

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austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:00 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

Oh wow....you can definitely tell upon reading that a lot of deep and painful emotions went into each line - I can definitely relate! This is fantastic writing!

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 11:58 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Your poem is amazing..And even I had a friend she was very sweet and acted like she'l be there with me forever but then she started spreading my secrets all over ...It was very embarasing and I HATE her for that...!!!

on Aug. 13 2010 at 2:17 pm
CreativeModelSould ELITE, Punta Gorda, Florida
102 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storms to pass, it is about learning to dance in the rain."

This was fabulous. I understand every word and when my "best friend" comes back I will be waiting for him right at his heart's door....

on Jul. 31 2010 at 2:52 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

omg! this is amazing dancer chic!!! i went thru the same thin w my bestie kimberly..she was so sweet thenchanged suddenly. she started flashing guys nd i had no idea where my best friend went! im looking at ur other work nd im sure i wont b dissapointed=) check my stuff out




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