Swallowed By Depression

June 4, 2010
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The sand is squishing
Beneath my toes
As we walk
Side by side
I can't believe
You said you loved me
The wind is blowing
Away my hair
The hair you
Brushed away so recently
I can't believe
You're gone
The sun is burning
My shoulders
But I don't care
Because I still
Can't believe
You didn't say good-bye
The water is lapping
At my tan legs
I can't believe
I'm going to do this
The tide is rising
And it swallows me into
The growing ocean
Darkness surrounds me
And I'm relieved
Because now I know
No one will ever
Break my heart again

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skywriter said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 12:59 pm
Very interesting suicide poem. I like the feeling you hit.
just-a-joy replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 1:48 pm

yah that was killer not just because it was about suicide

u really hit the point

Jesus_Freak replied...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 1:49 pm
thanks, most of my poems aren't really that good, so im glad someone likes this one.
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