New me

May 27, 2010
By Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"LIVE FAST DIE YOUNG"


I am lost in a world that no one sees
I want to get out but things stop me
I will soon get the courage to stand up and fight
I am sick of what goes on all the time
Its time for a change and it will start here
So listen and get ready for a brand new me


The author's comments:
i want to start fresh

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on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:21 am
Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"LIVE FAST DIE YOUNG"

thanks for the help !!!

on Jun. 29 2010 at 11:29 pm
LoveMakesAndBreaks BRONZE, San Gabriel, California
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Very Good meaning But maybe, somehow, you could make it filled with more imagery and descriptive...It would be more attrative if you didnt provide the literal meaning sorta...Ehh...:P This is just my opinion

"I am now ready to break restraining chains...I am ready to break my ice, my shell, my fears...I am ready for a new me"...Try that =)



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