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isn't there a place where thoughts can fly
where essential forms of nature,
like the soft lips of the Jimson Weed and the green waves that catch us heart and soul
are what makes us human
where those primitive forms of glory and those walls plastered with the letters of time
force us to places we can reach but cannot see
and ask us to sip from the ladle of the soup of life
causing all our reasons to continue fading
into that superior white perfection of a place where only thoughts can fly



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Fieldsofwind said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 10:26 pm:
absolutely beautiful. you put this gorgeous touch on a feeling barely anyone dares to describe.
 
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Supernova7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 3:30 pm:
Very good it's beautiful:)
 
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Jesus_Freak said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 2:15 pm:
This is really beautiful! Keep writing.
 
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mwahxandxmwa said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 5:08 am:

That is astonishingly beautiful, you paint a glorious picture with your soft flow of words.

Astonishing :D

 
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