Living dead

May 30, 2010
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when you were alive
you acted as if you were dead
so what’s the different if your in the grave
it’s all the same
you sit all by yourself
you’re still selfish
think of no one else
left your kids without a mother
left them with an irresponsible father
you were living dead
and you couldn’t even do that right
you left your kids with scars
built up a prison around you
with metal bars
hold yourself off from the world
but even that couldn’t keep you away from the truth
that you’re living dead

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 11:41 am
excellent captain. the title, the concept, the putdowns, the criticism-just excellent. I love it captain. 5 stars.
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