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You're Gone

April 23, 2010
By Randall009 BRONZE, Rutland, Vermont
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"All we have to fear is fear itself."


-FDR

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My stomach flips,
My heart skips,
I can't breathe,
My head is spinning,
Its like I'm swimming
and everything is blocked out,
an empty feeling grows inside me,
I'm all alone, and you're gone.

The author's comments:
This is the feeling I got when someone walked out of my life (for a very stupid reason). I know a lot of people get this feeling, so i thought it would be relate able.
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