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my girl

May 16, 2010
By Anonymous

I love the way she makes me laugh all day,
even when i am not in a good mood.
I love how she would sit with me and stay,
As we ate our delicious food.
As i thought that this day was O so great,
her boyfriend came and took her away.
My heart sank and it filled with hate,
I walk away telling myself no way.
I soon try to forget about my love,
but i cant get rid of my love for her.
My love for her is like the love of two white doves,
i want to hit him in the jugular.
i then find her on the sidewalk crying,
she tells me her boyfriend broke up with her.
I make her smile filling her with laughter,
she holds my hand and we walk together.

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem because I wanted people to know that if you try and never give up u will always achieve what you wanted. I love this girl but she doesnt love me. but i kept trying and she finally became mine.

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love2run GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:14 pm
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
12 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I failed my way to success." Thomas Edison
"What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?" Pre
"A ship in harbor is safe, but that's not what ships are built for." John Shedd

oh that is so sweet!