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When Your With Me
May 20, 2010
When your with me I don't feel blue
As if the sadness has drifted away
I can't control the way I feel about you because your a part of me
If you got erased I would be blank and feel like I don't belong when your with me I don't feel wrong your the love of my life and I would hate to see you leave like a non-colorful leaf flying away you are amazing just don't take advantage once in a while you should think about me.
© Cara L., Cheney, WA
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This article has 2 comments.
Sweet_Inspiration GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2010 at 6:35 pm
nice try i knew it was you luv ya sis
Spiritless BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 6:03 pm
Girlie, you may not have love but soon one day that special someone will be there, asking you to marry him. This is a wonderful peice, but my advice sweetheart is that you should seperate some of those sentences and use proper punctuation. Hope It helped. Just write back to me if you need any more advice. Thanks.
