When Your With Me

May 20, 2010
By Sweet_Inspiration GOLD, Corry, Pennsylvania
Sweet_Inspiration GOLD, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life for a better tomorrow." -Author Unknown


When your with me I don't feel blue
As if the sadness has drifted away
I can't control the way I feel about you because your a part of me
If you got erased I would be blank and feel like I don't belong when your with me I don't feel wrong your the love of my life and I would hate to see you leave like a non-colorful leaf flying away you are amazing just don't take advantage once in a while you should think about me.


The author's comments:
Love in my life that ic an never have but I can feel it.

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 6:35 pm
Sweet_Inspiration GOLD, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life for a better tomorrow." -Author Unknown

nice try i knew it was you luv ya sis

on Aug. 20 2010 at 6:03 pm
Spiritless BRONZE, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" I'm selfish, impatient, a little insecure but if you can't handle me at my worst then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best" ---Marilyn Monroe

Girlie, you may not have love but soon one day that special someone will be there, asking you to marry him. This is a wonderful peice, but my advice sweetheart is that you should seperate some of those sentences and use proper punctuation. Hope It helped. Just write back to me if you need any more advice. Thanks.


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