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Hiding Tears

May 11, 2010
By AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget


You don't listen, so you don't hear
You're caught in your net of secrets, hiding every tear
Why do you have to be so strong?
I wonder now, as I try to find where I went wrong

I feel so hurt, so betrayed
Unlike you, why am I so afraid?
You don't look, but can't you see?
How deep down, you're cutting me?
The blade you use, it's razor sharp
You're like the devil with the angel's harp
Hanging back in the shadows, you play without shame
Do you ever lose in this deadly game?

The way you left us for them, it isn't fair
Dont you get it? Or don't you care?
Remember what we used to be?
Before this dysfuntional routine?
The long hours on the phone
The feeling of never being alone
It doesn't have to be this way
So why can't you just stay?

Is whatever's wrong so confusing?
If this is a game, I'm surely losing
What does it take to be the winner?
To just say sorry, 'cuz we're all sinners?
We might be "Best Friends For Never,"
But you can't go on hiding tears forever.



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on Mar. 5 2012 at 12:18 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

I'm glad you think so :) Thank you for the comment

-Angel


on Aug. 10 2011 at 9:19 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

this is pretty awesome

on May. 5 2011 at 8:58 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

I've written a lot of other poems if you're interested, thank you for the comment :D

-Angel


bbeast BRONZE said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 10:57 am
bbeast BRONZE, Anaconda, Montana
2 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I learned this, at least, by my experiment; that if one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours.” ~Henry David Thoreau

Man this is awesome! I like the imagery a lot, and your word choice. Everything you say comes out really strong. Have you written anything else?

Also, like AlyBug, I keep things buried. My poetry is really the only time my emotions come out. None of mine has been accepted yet, so I wouldn't bother looking for a while if you're interested.


on Feb. 3 2011 at 11:13 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

Thanks for commenting on my work i really appreciate it :)

-Angel


mememelo said...
on Jan. 28 2011 at 4:39 pm
mememelo, Lamar, South Carolina
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wow! this is amzing. absolutely beautiful and it hit me pretty hard since i keep everythin i have buried down


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