You Leaned

I kissed you, yes
But it wasn't my move.
I moved closer to you,
But you leaned.

I'd stood on my tippy-toes
Our lips had met
But only for a second
You leaned

Thoughts of our "out-of-bounds play"
Made me happy, but my joy was cut short;
You're just a player
With another girl on your court.





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alanacarlene said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 7:54 pm
Lol!!!!! Ah your fingers were dripping with sarcasm! Gotta luv u! Haha the last stanza I just loved and the whole thing was great!
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 6:03 pm

thanks!!! I loved writing this piece because i was so angry

:)

 
alanacarlene replied...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 7:21 pm
Haha u angry! It's hard to imagine!!! :D u ever write a poem wen ur angry then break ur pencil led nd that makes u even more upset? Lol yea it's not fun hahaha
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 4:43 pm
grrr. yes! that annoys me so much! then I usually cant find a pencil sharpener either. >:( grr
 
alanacarlene replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 5:19 pm
LOL!!!! Yes! cant find a pencil sharpener and sometimes i can't find another pencil....well at least not in the same room haha :D
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn replied...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 2:54 pm
I know!!!! haha. :P
 
genesis27000 said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:52 am
WOW. This is so great. It's so awesome how you just captured those horrible feelings.
 
i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 11:07 am
ooh, i liked how u worded the ending! kooll :)
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 11:09 am
Thank you! :)
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 5:15 pm
I ended it like that because it happened by a basketball court. hah decided to end it by the location! yea... :)
 
i.ll_be_fine_899 replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 6:08 pm
ohh awesome. :))) a 'secret' reference
 
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