My Last Day

By , Lynn Haven, FL
Today is the last time
The last time I should smile
The last time I should cry
I shall never wake again

And on this day you will not find me
I will not be with family
I will not be with friends
To them i'm already gone

I'll run away to where it all started
The love that has turned into pain
And i'll sit there waiting until tomorrow
When I shall never wake again

And when tomorrow comes
I shall not hold sorrow only happiness
I'll go as silently as the wind
Fading slowly...





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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 6:37 pm
this is really sad and sounds suicidal but its still really good!! sorry if its wrong for saying that-but i still really liked it despite the picture it formed in my head...please check out some of my work when you get the chance;)
 
Aquafina replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 12:05 pm
Yea I know it sounds suicidal...my teacher assigned us to write a poem as if it was your last day so that's why it's like this
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 5:02 pm
oh good!! again, i really like it!! check out some of my work when you can:)
 
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