The First Step

May 2, 2010
By NudgeChannel1996 BRONZE, Peyton, Colorado
NudgeChannel1996 BRONZE, Peyton, Colorado
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She stared at a piece of
Broken glass
Then looked away.
She had to find another way
Of releasing the pain.
But how?

She dug her nails into her skin.
Her heart beat faster with the
Slight release she felt.
But it was not enough.

Oh how she wished she could
Find another alternative.
The scars were growing in numbers.
She could not hide them for
Much longer.

She was sick of wearing
Long sleeves and long pants.
Her legs looked disgusting.
So did her arms.
But she could not stop.

She took the glass
And she took away her pain
Once again.
She cried afterwards.
Cried because the pain
She felt on the inside was now
Causing pain on the outside.

She threw the bloodstained
Glass away.
This was it.
No more.
She picked up the telephone
Dialed the emergency line.
"Help me." She sobbed.

She had finally taken the
first step.

The author's comments:
To take away the pain doesn't necesarrily mean someone needs to cut themselves... Or commit suicide. There are people who care about people like the girl in the poem. Sure they might not think that, but that's because they're blocking people out. Not looking close enough.

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on May. 23 2010 at 5:16 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Really deep and bold. I like the end, how it didn't just end negatively like most poems about cutting. Check out my stuff?


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