the Way it Works

May 1, 2010
The words
Finally emerged from her mouth.
The words
Everyone had been longing to hear.
The words
Were simply not enough.
The words
Shredded apart life as she knew it.
The words through her tears,
"Goodbye freedom.."

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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 24, 2010 at 8:21 pm
This is deep and can kind of be looked at different ways, mean different things which is pretty hard to do. Look at my stuff?
CarolynQ said...
May 23, 2010 at 10:53 am

I wish I knew the story behind the poem the inspiration... it keeps me wondering.  It's good though, really good.

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