Dear Bestfriend(?),

April 30, 2010
By callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today.
-James Dean


Why can't you be around me, and your new friends at the same time?
How come your decisions are never the "good" ones?
When did you become so self-centered?
What did I do to you?
Who are you?
Let me know when you figure that out.


The author's comments:
I was thinking about how many times a day I think about the bestfriend I used to have. How she acts now, and what I'd like to know about why. I'm sorry to others who feel like this it's just that what I happens, just happens.

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on Aug. 5 2011 at 11:03 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

interesting i liked to hear how this happened but it's not my business fortunanetly a great poem came out of it and i'm sorry to hear u lost a best friend that's always hard in ways i feel like this girl has changed my friends but no one likes her she's a snob why am  i tellin gu this ? :P

on Aug. 3 2011 at 11:43 pm
corallee DIAMOND, Newport Coast, California
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I agree with the first line comment, but after that it's absolutely lovely. It's very relatable, and I really like how you kind of ram those questions at the reader just like how they'd fill up your head when you're frustrated with a "best friend". 

on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:02 pm
callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today.
-James Dean

I believe so as well! I just now noticed that too! Thank you for pointing that out :)!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:58 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

This is very emotional with the length. Anyway, I think you have a problem with the flow on the first line. Other than that, I really like this. :)


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