Dear Bestfriend(?),

April 30, 2010
Why can't you be around me, and your new friends at the same time?
How come your decisions are never the "good" ones?
When did you become so self-centered?
What did I do to you?
Who are you?
Let me know when you figure that out.





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musicispassion said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 11:03 pm
interesting i liked to hear how this happened but it's not my business fortunanetly a great poem came out of it and i'm sorry to hear u lost a best friend that's always hard in ways i feel like this girl has changed my friends but no one likes her she's a snob why am  i tellin gu this ? :P
 
corallee This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 11:43 pm
I agree with the first line comment, but after that it's absolutely lovely. It's very relatable, and I really like how you kind of ram those questions at the reader just like how they'd fill up your head when you're frustrated with a "best friend". 
 
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 7:58 pm
This is very emotional with the length. Anyway, I think you have a problem with the flow on the first line. Other than that, I really like this. :)
 
betweenyouandi replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 8:02 pm
I believe so as well! I just now noticed that too! Thank you for pointing that out :)!
 
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