Death In It's Disgusting Entirety

April 26, 2010
By wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'

You will rot somewhere far more lonely than the ground.
You rot here in a place called my heart.
You rot in a place where you'll rot forever.
Never will your body sink back into the ground.
Your flesh dissolves and your bones pierce me.
You're more dead than anyone ever before.
You have no scent, and you don't look like anything,
because you're so dead that you're no longer real.
You're so dead, my love, and it's killing me.
Disgustingly and painfully, it is tearing at my insides,
it's tugging on parts of myself that no one's ever touched,
no one's ever seen,
no one knows exist.
No one but you, in all of your beautiful non-existence.
You're a mystery and a permanent heart-ache.
I'm falling deeper into myself, in hopes that I can be with you.
You are dead and everything.
What is anything?
Entirely, entirely dead.
Disgustingly dead.

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XxBVBGRLxX said...
on May. 19 2010 at 11:02 pm
XxBVBGRLxX, Edwardsville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
\"I won\'t believe this lie. I know there\'s something more inside. When darkness is all you see, this is our Sweet Blasphemy.\" -A6

Great emotion in this poem! I love this so much!!

on May. 17 2010 at 10:26 pm
StevieRene SILVER, Magnolia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone will hurt you, you have to decide who is worth it
- Bob Marley

Your write so raw, totally your own emotions. Brava.


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