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Angels

Angels in the sky
Way up high
Angels in the sky
I wonder why

Whose in heaven?
Who all goes?
I don't even know!

Is my dog that died there?
Is my grandmother there?
Is my grandpaul there?
My uncle or gold fish?
Am I just being childish?

Angels everywhere
Angels soaring through the ksy
Way up high
I wonder why





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mysterywriter2012 said...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 1:09 pm
hey, don't copy me :P
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2010 at 10:32 am
i like the image you painted a picture of. everybody wants to walk outside and see a bunch of people flying around in the air. this is very nice captain. you have a way of reaching my heart. i think i'm going to adopt you.
 
Saint,that,Sins This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 7:24 am
i like the idea in this passage, but the writing is a little confusing, you seem to switch from poetic to just talking, and it doesnt flow as well as it should. But the idea of "who are the angels and why are they up there?" is really cool! keep writingt what you feel.
 
mysterywriter2012 said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:17 am
i meant to put sky instead of ksy! sorry :D
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 12, 2010 at 1:35 pm
I agree with the above. The whole idea is amazing. I might just use that :)
 
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