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I once gave you
Thirteen roses
The brightest shade
Of red
Petals still dewy
With life
And you laughed
Asking
Why I got you
Thirteen roses
When it’s no
Secret
That I liked you

I answered:

Thirteen, because that’s the
Number of things I love about you

Thirteen, because that the
Number of dates we’ve been on

Thirteen, because …

The florist told me so.





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2010 at 8:23 pm
see, i love work like this and I love people like you. this is a very nice unique piece-and not just some crap like"13 roses for every time you ripped out my heart." very nice. would you read "living in bliss" by insaneprincess-she could use the feedback.....
 
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