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When I look

April 10, 2010
By Anonymous

When I look at the deep sea,
I think of you and me.
When I look at the sun shine,
I think of your hand in mine.
When I look at the green trees,
I think of how you left me.
When I look at the black TV,
I think of how your missing.
When I look at the news anchor,
They say your dead for sure.
When I look at the ink on this note,
I think of how I lost hope.
When I look at myself crying,
I think of how its worth dying.

© Anonymous

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