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closing the blinds

April 9, 2010
By poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"


[Closing the blinds, shutting my eyes, I lay on my bed as you run through my head. And...I cant stand without feeling like i'm going to collapse, yet time still feels like it'll never pass. I miss breathing your air, i miss the smell of your hair. And i know these tears wont cover up that your not here. I'm closing the blinds, shutting my eyes, my tears revive. Through the blue, i see the truth, baby i miss you]



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on Jun. 6 2010 at 1:08 pm
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

thank you very much il take a look at your work

 


Miseltoe GOLD said...
on May. 30 2010 at 6:17 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

I like the way u wrote this peice its sounds poetic becasue of the rhymes but yet it also conveys the feel of self talk or a stream of consciousness... Good Job