closing the blinds

April 9, 2010
[Closing the blinds, shutting my eyes, I lay on my bed as you run through my head. And...I cant stand without feeling like i'm going to collapse, yet time still feels like it'll never pass. I miss breathing your air, i miss the smell of your hair. And i know these tears wont cover up that your not here. I'm closing the blinds, shutting my eyes, my tears revive. Through the blue, i see the truth, baby i miss you]

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Miseltoe said...
May 30, 2010 at 6:17 pm
I like the way u wrote this peice its sounds poetic becasue of the rhymes but yet it also conveys the feel of self talk or a stream of consciousness... Good Job
mallory14 replied...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 1:08 pm

thank you very much il take a look at your work


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