The Sooner It's Over

April 24, 2010
By TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’


She couldn't take it anymore. Thoughts of suicide
flooding her mind.
She walked into the bedroom.
A shiny 22 waits under the bed.
The sooner it's over,
the better.
One little choice.
It seemed so simple at the time.
Like the only way out.
Her parents would have freaked and her boyfriend would leave
if they knew.
"It was the only way."
She kept telling herself.
"It's the only thing to do."
But now she has to deal with a guilty conscience.
She thought she was playing safe,
but sometimes things don't turn out the way you expect.
And now she's all alone.
The boy she loved left.
Her faithful parents
abandoned their only daughter
in her time of need.
She had nothing left to live for.
She couldn't take it anymore. Thoughts of suicide flooding her mind.
She walked into the bedroom,
a shiny 22 waits under the bed.
She thinks to herself, "The sooner it's over,
the better."
"What will be my choice?"



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TheJust ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:45 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Hey, if you liked this one, check out "A Letter from Your Future Child"! :)

TheJust ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:45 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Hey, if you liked this one, check out "A Letter from Your Future Child"! :)

TheJust ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:44 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Hey, if you liked this one, check out "A Letter from Your Future Child"! :)

TheJust ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:44 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Hey, if you liked this one, check out "A Letter from Your Future Child"! :)

TheJust ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:43 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Hey, if you liked this one, check out "A Letter from Your Future Child"! :)

TheJust ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:43 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Hey, if you liked this one, check out "A Letter from Your Future Child"! :)

TheJust ELITE said...
on May. 4 2010 at 4:43 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Thank you! :)

on May. 4 2010 at 4:40 pm

HA HA IM NO CREEPER

ANY WAY UR WRITING IS REALLY GOOD

KEEP BUILDING ON IT:)


TheJust ELITE said...
on May. 4 2010 at 8:28 am
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

No, I really am a teen, no worry's about that :)

on May. 3 2010 at 9:25 pm
I MEAN U SOUND OLDER THAN A TEENAGER

on May. 3 2010 at 9:07 pm
I WAS JUST WONDERING IF U WERE AN ACTUAL TEENAGER AND NOT SOME OLD 30 yEAR oLD

TheJust ELITE said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 8:06 am
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Why does it matter?

on Apr. 30 2010 at 7:35 am
how old are you?

TheJust ELITE said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 2:28 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Thanks and I will!

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 9:40 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 220 comments
Deep, dark, and amazing. Love the topic and storyline... take a look at mine whenever you have time. Once again though, really good job!!!

TheJust ELITE said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 4:06 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

No problem....

TheJust ELITE said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 4:05 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Thank you very much!

on Apr. 28 2010 at 3:39 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Your welcome :D

Maybe you could check out some of my work? I just had some new articles posted.


TheJust ELITE said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 3:36 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Thanx! :) :) :)

on Apr. 28 2010 at 3:32 pm
OpenDoors SILVER, Laramie, Wyoming
6 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Darker the night Brighter the day, Feirser the Fight, Stronger the Faith."

I love this. It is ammazing! I love how so many people could relate to this poem. Keep on writting don't stop you have got some talent.


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