can i trust you with my heart?

April 2, 2010
By Anonymous

Can I trust you with my heart?
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.
I just know he is here for me.
And I know I love him.
But the question is does he love me too?
I just hope he does, because I don’t know what I would do without him.
I need him.
But can I trust him with my heart this time?
I live through these rough days!
He says he won’t hurt me but can I believe him?
Can I trust his word?
I hope I can because there is not much of my heart left.
But yet again he lets me down!
So now I live in this world without a heart because he took the last of it with him.
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.


The author's comments:
This piece is for how guys let girls down and break their heart over and over again!!!

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on Apr. 24 2011 at 9:10 pm
kelsey2097 SILVER, Boothwyn, Pennsylvania
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im not a fighter im a lover, but ill fight for what i love

this is so true! </3

on Jun. 22 2010 at 2:55 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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ya but now i just found out he is moving and i will never tell him how much i really love him!!!! even though he hurt!!! i still care!! :(

on Jun. 13 2010 at 11:36 am
GrishkoPrincess SILVER, Pierz, Minnesota
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My love for you is like a metal rose, it will never die.

it really does...

on Jun. 12 2010 at 8:34 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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ya it does suck cuz for some reason i still love that person n i always will even hough he hurt me so many times!!! :(

on May. 22 2010 at 11:56 am
GrishkoPrincess SILVER, Pierz, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
My love for you is like a metal rose, it will never die.

it sucks when you cant hate them for it doesn't it?

on May. 20 2010 at 4:05 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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oohh i'm srry to hear that!!!! ya i been cheated on 4 times!! :(

on May. 19 2010 at 9:28 pm
GrishkoPrincess SILVER, Pierz, Minnesota
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My love for you is like a metal rose, it will never die.

ya we went out...for a week with barely seeing each other...then he lied and said his mom didnt want him to date me and broke up wit me

on May. 19 2010 at 3:58 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks n ya guys dont know that they are hurting you until you finally break down and cry!!!!

on May. 19 2010 at 3:57 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks n i will read some of ur stuff!!! :)

on May. 9 2010 at 11:54 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks for commenting n ya same here thats what happened to me like four times it seems like i dnt make mistakes i just date them but im done doin that so now im waiting for the right guy to come along.......

on May. 9 2010 at 11:52 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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ya i will look at some of ur work n comment for you lol!!!!  

on Apr. 30 2010 at 4:16 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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ya i kno how that feels but did he ever give u a chance? if u dnt mind me asking....i'm here if u want to talk bout love problems even tho i dont kno u i like giving people advice!!

on Apr. 30 2010 at 4:15 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks n i will do that n yea idk if i can trust this one person but i will anyways cuz i love him too much!!!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:33 pm
xxbabiigurlxx BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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"You have enemies? Good. That means you actually stood up for something in your life."~Eminem

you're very welcome

on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:10 pm
GrishkoPrincess SILVER, Pierz, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
My love for you is like a metal rose, it will never die.

I haven't gotten over him yet either...yet he is currently with my best friend and I cant hate either of them for it I love them both too much

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:55 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks it happened to me like 4 times so i write about things like this but i try not to tell people that the peom is about me!!!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:54 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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i am proud of my work i just don't know how to change that!! sorry... n thanks

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:53 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks n im not really ashamed of my work but some people just don't understand why i write things like this....but i write them cause i have been heart broken like 4 times all ready

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:51 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks :) check out my other work if you want!!!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:51 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks i try but i dont think its really that good cause normally people are just like" get over it he dont like you" but its hard for me so i write these peoms about relationships.




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