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can i trust you with my heart?

April 2, 2010
By Anonymous

Can I trust you with my heart?
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.
I just know he is here for me.
And I know I love him.
But the question is does he love me too?
I just hope he does, because I don’t know what I would do without him.
I need him.
But can I trust him with my heart this time?
I live through these rough days!
He says he won’t hurt me but can I believe him?
Can I trust his word?
I hope I can because there is not much of my heart left.
But yet again he lets me down!
So now I live in this world without a heart because he took the last of it with him.
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.

© Anonymous

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This piece is for how guys let girls down and break their heart over and over again!!!
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mandi caldwell GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:49 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thanks n ya it did happen to me like 4 times but i just cant stop thinking about this one guy!! :)
kissingdarkness SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 9:42 am
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this is amazing i really do like it
GrishkoPrincess SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:50 pm
GrishkoPrincess SILVER, Pierz, Minnesota
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"I hate that He lets me down, yet I cannot cut short my love for Him...He drags me down, yet I still clutch at the belief that somehow I can pull Him up to me..." -Mareena

my life quote, that is reflected in this poem, and i love you for this

BryannaJ. GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 4:35 pm
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Wow this is a very nice poem. I can totaly relate to it. Hey did this really happen to you or just a random poem idea? *if you don't mind my asking*
Karma_Crow PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 12:33 pm
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Feel proud of your work here. This is excelent. Don't be ashamed of your darkest moments. I love this. Continue.
xxbabiigurlxx BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 2:24 pm
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i dont know why you put anonymous. you should be proud of this!
h2obamboo said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 12:41 pm

I really can relate to this and i like it ALOT!!!!

Good Job!

Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 7:49 am
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Great job Christina! That is really nice, I used to like someone like this, but I don't anymore. Why? Because he let me down, he wasn't nearly as nice as I thought he was and I realized, that's just not the kind of person I want in my life...
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on Apr. 17 2010 at 8:31 pm
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This is great!!! I relate to it
pepsilover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 8:54 pm
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I Really like this keep writing i can def. relatE!!! wish i could write like that! :) check out my stuff i would really apprechiate it!
Whisperer PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 5:33 pm
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this is really good. i can kinda relate because i don't know if i can trust this one person. but i keep on doing it. so thank you:)

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