Unforgotten

March 22, 2010
By xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3


Your smile leaves a permanent
imprint on my heart each and
every day
I want to run to you, let you
hold me in your arms.
Your eyes shine like the stars
glare in the vast midnight-blue
sky
Therefore, it's an understatement
when I say my stomach clenches
everytime I have to just keep
walking on by
I can't let you see my pain, your
beautiful face crumpled in
anguish for me
You have treated me always with
such care, forever kind
I'm ashamed to say your facade
never seems to escape my mind



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on May. 23 2010 at 8:18 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

wow, all ur commentz have made my dayy;) thxx u so much 4 every1z feedbackk & course, i'd luv 2 read some of urz!

on May. 22 2010 at 1:41 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Oh. My. Goodness. I absolutely LOVE this piece! It actually brought tears to my eyes. I can relate to this in every way. And I'm sure others can too. Please keep writing, and if you want check out some of my work. :)

on May. 10 2010 at 8:07 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

wow :D i loved this one. you really know how to take a feeling everybody gets sometime or another, even if you don't know where it came from, and put it into amazing words with great detail.  love, love, loved it!!!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:23 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

lol. i did like it...evn if ya aren't sure where it came from... <3 keep writingg

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:02 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

aw thanx! glad ya liked it. after re-reading it, idkk where it came from but somehow I think it turned out okk :P appreciate the feedback!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 2:55 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

I love this....some reason I'm not sure of.

It's cute tho...

Nice wording...





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