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March 22, 2010
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Your smile leaves a permanent
imprint on my heart each and
every day
I want to run to you, let you
hold me in your arms.
Your eyes shine like the stars
glare in the vast midnight-blue
sky
Therefore, it's an understatement
when I say my stomach clenches
everytime I have to just keep
walking on by
I can't let you see my pain, your
beautiful face crumpled in
anguish for me
You have treated me always with
such care, forever kind
I'm ashamed to say your facade
never seems to escape my mind





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WritingLoverForever said...
May 22, 2010 at 1:41 pm
Oh. My. Goodness. I absolutely LOVE this piece! It actually brought tears to my eyes. I can relate to this in every way. And I'm sure others can too. Please keep writing, and if you want check out some of my work. :)
 
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
May 23, 2010 at 8:18 pm
wow, all ur commentz have made my dayy;) thxx u so much 4 every1z feedbackk & course, i'd luv 2 read some of urz!
 
invisible13 said...
May 10, 2010 at 8:07 am
wow :D i loved this one. you really know how to take a feeling everybody gets sometime or another, even if you don't know where it came from, and put it into amazing words with great detail.  love, love, loved it!!!!!!!!!!
 
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 2:55 pm

I love this....some reason I'm not sure of.

It's cute tho...

Nice wording...

 
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 3:02 pm
aw thanx! glad ya liked it. after re-reading it, idkk where it came from but somehow I think it turned out okk :P appreciate the feedback!
 
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 3:23 pm
lol. i did like it...evn if ya aren't sure where it came from... <3 keep writingg
 
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