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Pink frosted cupcakes
Stare at me

With multicolored
Sprinkled eyes

Their soft red hair
Licks the atmosphere

Their mouths
Are crinkled in waxy
Disgust

But

When their hair is blown off
Their lips peeled away
Their eyes licked up

They are delicious




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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 7:09 pm:
This is very strange... and very good. I'm glad that you're able to make something so creatively from a boring day and a cupcake. This was really written well. "Their soft red hair/ licks the atmosphere" is a great line. You had a perfect ending.
 
JustJanelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 10:45 pm :
Thank you very much for your compliment and honest opinion! :)
 
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