Birthday Girl

March 21, 2010
By JustJanelle BRONZE, North Andover, Massachusetts
JustJanelle BRONZE, North Andover, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air. -Emerson
You must be the square root of pi because you make me irrational. -Shivani Deshmukh


Pink frosted cupcakes
Stare at me

With multicolored
Sprinkled eyes

Their soft red hair
Licks the atmosphere

Their mouths
Are crinkled in waxy
Disgust

But

When their hair is blown off
Their lips peeled away
Their eyes licked up

They are delicious


The author's comments:
This was inspired by a cupcake on a really boring rainy day.

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on Sep. 29 2010 at 10:45 pm
JustJanelle BRONZE, North Andover, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air. -Emerson
You must be the square root of pi because you make me irrational. -Shivani Deshmukh

Thank you very much for your compliment and honest opinion! :)

on Sep. 29 2010 at 7:09 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is very strange... and very good. I'm glad that you're able to make something so creatively from a boring day and a cupcake. This was really written well. "Their soft red hair/ licks the atmosphere" is a great line. You had a perfect ending.


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