March 26, 2010
I never realized that when you
Spoke those unkind words
The wall raised between us
Would not crumble before my sanity

Things happened that I will always regret
Things haunting me I will never forget
No matter how much I pray
I cannot erase what’s written in stone

I begin to resent myself
I wish I could rip my soul from its hollow shell
I will never forgive myself; apologies cannot fathom
I never meant to make you cry

Even though I gave you my heart
Beating in your palm
You crushed it by your own will, along with my soul
I never wished to hurt you
I never thought I’d say those words

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irrara12 said...
May 25, 2010 at 7:16 pm
This is really good and sad.
Hannah Y. said...
May 21, 2010 at 10:45 pm
Hello again! I just wanted to thank you for the nice comment on my work and tell you i have tagged this as a favorite.
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2010 at 3:59 pm
wow, this is so amazing. this is dramatic and i feel like it happened to me--great job! ps... i LOVE evanescense and i can see why she(or they--whatever) would inspire a poem!! can you check out some of my work? thanks!!
Hannah Y. said...
May 17, 2010 at 11:55 pm
This is hauntingly sad and well written. I love how much imagery your words contain. You should post more because you are obviously very talented. If you get the chance could you possibly look up and rate/comment my first piece of work; Leaves Of Youth? Thanks.
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