Regret

March 26, 2010
By EmoToboe BRONZE, Kemp, Texas
EmoToboe BRONZE, Kemp, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When you've lost it all.......That's when you finally realize.....That life is BEAUTIFUL


Regret
I never realized that when you
Spoke those unkind words
The wall raised between us
Would not crumble before my sanity

Things happened that I will always regret
Things haunting me I will never forget
No matter how much I pray
I cannot erase what’s written in stone

I begin to resent myself
I wish I could rip my soul from its hollow shell
I will never forgive myself; apologies cannot fathom
I never meant to make you cry

Even though I gave you my heart
Beating in your palm
You crushed it by your own will, along with my soul
I never wished to hurt you
I never thought I’d say those words


The author's comments:
Uh. This piece found me when I was tired, and had been listening to Evanescence for a few hours.
Yeah yeah, it's angsty, I know I know

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on May. 25 2010 at 7:16 pm
irrara12 BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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This is really good and sad.

on May. 21 2010 at 10:45 pm
RawyaAviva SILVER, Tuolumne, California
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"I wake up every morning determined to change the world and have one heck of a good time . Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult."-E. B. White

Hello again! I just wanted to thank you for the nice comment on my work and tell you i have tagged this as a favorite.

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on May. 18 2010 at 3:59 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

wow, this is so amazing. this is dramatic and i feel like it happened to me--great job! ps... i LOVE evanescense and i can see why she(or they--whatever) would inspire a poem!! can you check out some of my work? thanks!!

on May. 17 2010 at 11:55 pm
RawyaAviva SILVER, Tuolumne, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I wake up every morning determined to change the world and have one heck of a good time . Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult."-E. B. White

This is hauntingly sad and well written. I love how much imagery your words contain. You should post more because you are obviously very talented. If you get the chance could you possibly look up and rate/comment my first piece of work; Leaves Of Youth? Thanks.


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