Barry & I: Badmitten

March 25, 2010
By SirSeba BRONZE, Marysville, California
SirSeba BRONZE, Marysville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Just because you can, doesnt always mean you should" ~ achreon


It's just another game,
just another day.
I may not see the shuttlecock
when it's comeing my way
but that won't stop me,
i'll clear the birdie to the back of the court anyway.
with the battledore
we are called agressive.
our serving is not impressive.
but with the racket and the birdie,
Barry & I
can play a mean game of Badmitten


The author's comments:
inspired in english, but inspired by P.E. games of badmitten. Barry is my partner in the game. comment/rate

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SirSeba BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 6:50 pm
SirSeba BRONZE, Marysville, California
1 article 9 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just because you can, doesnt always mean you should" ~ achreon

haha Thanks. but the poem is all true. about 80% of the time, I couldn't see the birdie when it was comeing towards me. I just swung and happened to hit it lol. and the other people in my class would always say we were aggressive in this game.

on Apr. 12 2010 at 2:07 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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haha, this is very good! I especially like the sense of humor and the way you can almost hear you talk behind the poem. Great job!




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