Betrayal: the Worst Sort of Pain

March 24, 2010
By Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown


Wishing I knew who to trust.
Once upon a time I trusted my friends,
But lately I wonder often, “Do I have any?”
I say this because often do they betray me,
As though they wish to slay me.
In a way they do just that,
Because when they betray me they rip my heart apart!
It’s worse than ridicule or hate, betrayal is.
It hurts like nothing else.
I am sure of this…


The author's comments:
I wrote this because lately it seems that i have no friends, to say the least...but hey, life goes on!!! haha

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on May. 14 2010 at 11:36 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
20 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

Thank you. I love your word usage while critiquing me. Thanks.

on May. 14 2010 at 8:58 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you sound so sure and certain that everybody hates you. "it hurts like nothing else, i'm sure of this." this is very nice, concrete, and inspirational in a sort of diabolical way. 5 stars.

on Apr. 28 2010 at 10:59 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
20 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

Thank you so very much :)

on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:23 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

I like this.  A lot. I've been there before, only but a few years past. It has depth... meaning. A great inspiration for poetry. Great job.




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