Betrayal: the Worst Sort of Pain

March 24, 2010
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Wishing I knew who to trust.
Once upon a time I trusted my friends,
But lately I wonder often, “Do I have any?”
I say this because often do they betray me,
As though they wish to slay me.
In a way they do just that,
Because when they betray me they rip my heart apart!
It’s worse than ridicule or hate, betrayal is.
It hurts like nothing else.
I am sure of this…





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2010 at 8:58 am
you sound so sure and certain that everybody hates you. "it hurts like nothing else, i'm sure of this." this is very nice, concrete, and inspirational in a sort of diabolical way. 5 stars.
 
Starrlyt replied...
May 14, 2010 at 11:36 am
Thank you. I love your word usage while critiquing me. Thanks.
 
KosuKovu13 said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 3:23 pm
I like this.  A lot. I've been there before, only but a few years past. It has depth... meaning. A great inspiration for poetry. Great job.
 
Starrlyt replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 10:59 am
Thank you so very much :)
 
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