This Won’t Stop ­Until You Stop MAG

March 23, 2010
By EDeCa GOLD, Santo Domingo, Other
EDeCa GOLD, Santo Domingo, Other
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Seizing every one of my senses
Your malevolent bourbon gaze devoured me
And I knew then the words you would choose to thrust upon me.
It was a song I already knew by memory,
But still it took me by surprise (as it always does)
When you became ready to pounce
Like a cobra lying lazily on hot cement
Who ever so suddenly
Attacks



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on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:01 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

Wow I really like this one. It really expresses the feeling of vulnerabilty and distrust. You did a very nice job of portraying your emotions. Check out some of my work, too if you'd like. Keep writing!


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