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Silent whispers; and in thy name,
unbreathed glory, emotion but tame.
A silent life, a life lived dead,
hateful regret by words unsaid.
Forward, backward, hard and slice
Frigid screams, bodies of ice.
What pointless visits by angels come,
Young Satan stole a girl, and numb.
Oh heavy darkness, oh pain surreal,
Oh slashed veins forever can’t heal.
Through hope spoken, and unheard
Love though never, still preferred.
Faces; how innocent and passing by,
Forlorn child and her sobs, deny.
How hopeless, and in its name,
All but a thing one child to blame.
The eternal gift; tonight final breath,
Swallow young tears, forever in death.





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AriM said...
May 21, 2010 at 3:27 pm
i love the rhymes and the end gives you chills, but not in a bad way, there's so much emotion there
 
feartheuntypical said...
May 20, 2010 at 2:19 am
It's amazing
 
delilahsky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 20, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Thank you so much!
 
arithefriend said...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 2:05 pm
Gabs, this is rly beautiful and sad and emotion invoking and I love it. :)
 
delilahsky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 2:05 pm
Glad to hear it!
 
Meiling said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 4:03 pm
You are so amazing <33 This is fabulous.
 
delilahsky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 4:04 pm
Meimei I love you!
 
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