True Love

March 13, 2010
By Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."


The depth of his soul,
matches his eyes,
Hair as black as coal,
With a heart as big as anything
I shall be true to him,
Since we are to part,
For our love is as dim
As a million candles in the moonlight

The author's comments:
I'n not really sure! I guess telling people not to cheat... reading over it. I just like writing lovey-dovey stuff, I guess.

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on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:05 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

The last line... *shudders* I needed something to go with dim. It's saying that thier love is as bright as those candles. I know that's not my best.

on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:42 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I love the first line!!!! but the last one confused me could you explain?

on Jun. 2 2010 at 9:31 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Thank you!

on Jun. 2 2010 at 8:55 pm
XXXXXShIaNeNeIsMeXXXXX SILVER, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
5 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is complicated but wonderful"

aww this is sooo sweet i love it!!!!!!!! like 110% =P

on May. 6 2010 at 8:59 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Thanks! =D

on May. 5 2010 at 9:14 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

"The depth of his soul,
matches his eyes" i love that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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