True Love

March 13, 2010
The depth of his soul,
matches his eyes,
Hair as black as coal,
With a heart as big as anything
I shall be true to him,
Since we are to part,
For our love is as dim
As a million candles in the moonlight

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Supernova7 said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 10:42 pm
I love the first line!!!! but the last one confused me could you explain?
Authorgal98 replied...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 1:05 pm
The last line... *shudders* I needed something to go with dim. It's saying that thier love is as bright as those candles. I know that's not my best.
jonas_chic899 said...
May 5, 2010 at 9:14 pm
"The depth of his soul,
matches his eyes" i love that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Authorgal98 replied...
May 6, 2010 at 8:59 pm
Thanks! =D
ella_esta_en_mi_corazon replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 8:55 pm
aww this is sooo sweet i love it!!!!!!!! like 110% =P
Authorgal98 replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 9:31 pm
Thank you!
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