Imprint

March 19, 2010
By Khia_A. PLATINUM, Sicily Island, Louisiana
Khia_A. PLATINUM, Sicily Island, Louisiana
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Stay who you are no matter what you face along the way.


A bond so special
Broken into something weak.
Believe me or not,
That hurt me deep.

Feel your emotions,
Feel your pain,
Got me feeling
Like I'm alone in the rain.

This bond we had
Like we were one mind,
Or this is all me
Just this one time.

An imprint,
Like were animals, not humans
Same thoughts, same mind
Different Actions.

You broke my heart,
Pieced it back together.
Only to break it again,
Now we not together.



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on Apr. 10 2010 at 5:18 pm
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This is really good, I like the theme of it :) 

on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:03 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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I'd rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I'm not~Anonymous

No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

this is really great! i love the last stanza. it's simply amazing and explains so much. thank you for sharing! :)

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on Apr. 6 2010 at 2:32 pm
kissingdarkness SILVER, Mill Creek, Oklahoma
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lets see............ be yourself

it great!!!   i love it

on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:10 pm
TigerLily212 GOLD, Aliquippa, Pennsylvania
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"In the end we're all lines on the concrete drawn only to be washed away in the time I've been given I am what I am." - Never Enough by Five Finger Death Punch

Wow I really like this poem! Great work!

 "Same thoughts, same mind Different Actions" so awesome!





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