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She Left the Earth (maybe)

March 19, 2010
By shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis


I cried for you tonight
I'm afraid I've lost
you, lost you for good...
Lost my best friend, until
I go to heaven

I'm scared that you've actually
left this time...



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on May. 11 2010 at 6:22 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

this is really sad and emotional and well written. very nice.do your dance.

on Apr. 7 2010 at 9:13 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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I'd rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I'm not~Anonymous

No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

this is really short but also really touching. good work :) i love it

on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:19 pm
deardiary BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is a truth universally acknowedged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. -Pride and Prejudice

Wow, it says so much in so little words. The title is especially revealing- love it!

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 6:43 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

How beautiful...

on Apr. 6 2010 at 11:43 am
yesimdarrian101 BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything may not be perfect, but at least we tried." Stephen Jerzak/Chase Coy

this was really touching and deep. good job. :)

on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:20 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

thanks              

on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:52 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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daw, this touches me so deeply. Very evocative. Good job!

on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:58 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

and also, thanks

on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:55 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

kk, I'm going to look at both of your writing.

on Apr. 5 2010 at 3:16 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is very nice. Keep writing. If you have time, please check out my work. Comments and ratings are greatly appreciated.

on Apr. 5 2010 at 2:38 pm
KayKays222 BRONZE, Ordway, Colorado
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You're the forever lasting rose in my garden of life

I like this and I can relate to it. You should read some of my stuff and tell me what you think.


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