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One day long ago
I woke up
And there you were watching over me
You said you were always there for me
You said you never leave me
You were my light
You were the reason i pushed myslef through everyday
But now your're gone

The rain was so cold that day
The trees were so tall
But i was still alone and you werent there at all
It was like the world had truned its back on me
No one was there
Except you
Holding my hand
You said you wouldnt ever let go
But all of a sudden you did

I needed you
I trusted you
And even more I loved you
I thought I finally found someone
Someone who wanted me for who I was
But you left me
You said it was over you said it was done
You said you hated me and now you've won
You broke my heart you tore it in two

You lied to me
You let me believe every lie you had told
like people cared
But no one cares I mean sure they feel a little sad for me
But then they eventually move on
And then they stop caring
I hope you know I will never forgive you

But the good thing for me is
I just love to hate you
I love knowing what you lost
Knowing your a failure without me
You're a hopeless loser
That is what gives me hope
What keeps me going
I like proving you wrong
Everyday you had spent with me and now all I can say is I don't care anymore



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Milo! said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 9:38 am
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
amazingkp. replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:28 pm
I totally agree with you...it think its so understandable. And i really enjoyed reading it!!1 Good job!! Don't forget to check out some of my work...i think you might like it!!! Keep writing....because you are really good!
 
babycakes replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 11:55 am
thank you both so much and i will be sure to return the favor and leave comments
 
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