Walls

March 6, 2010
By christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!


She is drowning in her own self induced misery.
Standing there with her famous act on play
But inside she is still bruised and battered.
Somehow she finds a place to store her emotions away.

Everyone questions if she is ever happy?
She just answers contempt to keep this going, fearing the judgement.
She claims she claims she doesnt care, that she doesnt need anybody.
Truth is she needs everybody, she takes plunges in extremes.

Facing every fear she has ever had, she finds something worth breaking her walls down.
Unguarded her inner soul radiates, shinning brighter than any star in the sky.
She sits there same ole frown
He comes and sits by her and runs his finger down her cheek as she gently crys.
Exposing her weakness to him, she just looks down.

He cares?
That one thing she has been searching for has always been in front of her face.
Two souls stuck in time for a moment that is forever theirs.
She wishes they could run away and disappear without leaving a trace.
As she sits there, she allows her fantasies to take control.
Roaming the endless possibilities.
He makes her feel whole.
Suddenly she snaps back to reality, that dreadful place.
For now she wishes he would come around and turn her hellhole,
into her fantasy race.


The author's comments:
what this is talking about is everyone has had that one thing they wanted so bad but had to watch it slip through your fingers. She is in love with a guy that she is to afraid to admitt her feelings because of fear of rejection. So she loves him from afar.

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:48 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

this was absolutely beautiful. the imagery and the simplicity of your word choice was amazing. excellent job:) i really enjoyed it, and you are a talented writer.

on Jul. 22 2010 at 3:53 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

This is absolutely amazing!!!! I love it!!! 

on Jul. 6 2010 at 8:42 pm
musiclover71 ELITE, Hutto, Texas
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"Normal is overrated." - Gregory House

wow. this is amazing! keep writing i mean WOW :) definetly one of my favorites

on Jul. 6 2010 at 6:01 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

I'm glad. (: im goin to check our work out.

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 9:08 pm
Love it!           




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