March 10, 2010
By thespian13ona SILVER, Waikoloa, Hawaii
thespian13ona SILVER, Waikoloa, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
death is fleeting, love is forever

stay gone now, da wata
da sand small kine wet unda my feet
da ground is growlin, make me sked
try fo get up and run, I see da wata chargin
but now da ground swallow me

i too late

The author's comments:
this poem is in Hawaiian Creole English (pidgin)

i wrote it whne we had a tsunami warning in hawaii

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on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

"I too late" is final like hello. death. there it is. very nice ending.

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