March 10, 2010
stay gone now, da wata
da sand small kine wet unda my feet
da ground is growlin, make me sked
try fo get up and run, I see da wata chargin
but now da ground swallow me

i too late

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 12:42 pm
"I too late" is final like hello. death. there it is. very nice ending.
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