My Musical Fire

March 9, 2010
By Jackie<333 BRONZE, Palmyra, New York
Jackie<333 BRONZE, Palmyra, New York
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Fire is so
bright and warm.
It roars at me
to stay back.
He keeps
me safe.
With his red hair
and his orange face,
he sings me a song.
The crackling tune
and the musical blaze.
It is all so wonderful.
I dance while I look up at the stars
and back down at the fire.
What a beautiful night I think to myself.
What a beautiful night.

The author's comments:
I decided to write this poem based on when I went camping. All I could think about was the fire. Then I made the fire more fun and interesting.

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on Mar. 25 2010 at 8:15 am
CaitlinMarie BRONZE, Norco, Louisiana
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I love this poem. (:

And how come when ever I comment on something it has this CaitlinPaige girl also? :P

on Mar. 24 2010 at 10:36 pm
DelightfullyDAZED PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
~Our arms start from the back because they were once wings
~ suppose shes a wildflower
~i am free of all predujice, i hate everyone equally

i really like this =]

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