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I am a new bird, an un-hatched egg,
Ready to explode and crack open,
Fighting to peep out and see the light.
I am the lightning bugs flying in the dark,
Flashing, and bringing excitement.
I am the flow of the ocean,
Mixing, moving, and churning.
Then everything flows out with the tide.



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Heyamyitsolivia said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 11:55 am:
This was super awesome!! You're such a good poet!
 
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VoiceOfStars said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 11:33 am:
Amazing. Very touching and has so much meaining
 
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bostonredsox1888 said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 5:59 pm:
the metaphors were a great idea; and then how you described what you were in the metaphor. it was great and inspiring
 
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FlyleafFreak said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 5:00 pm:
This is really good, i really like the slant rhyme and how its short and sweet, but with so much depth. Really amazing, five out of five
 
Amy A. replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 5:19 pm :
Thanks a lot for all the great comments. I'm really glad everyone is enjoying this piece!
 
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Joyful_angel said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 10:28 pm:
very nice metaphores!!!!
this is an awesome poem!
 
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whatIreallythink said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 7:20 pm:
"Nothing becomes every shining thing"
have you read that book? I can't rememebr what it's called
 
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CaitlinPaige said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 7:33 pm:
i like how you used metaphors to describe yourself
 
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CaitlinPaige said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 7:32 pm:
i love the way you use the metaphors to describe yourself like that, very good
 
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deardiary said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 6:01 pm:
luv the metaphors
 
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