Spilling A Secret

March 12, 2010
By Amy Alexander BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
Amy Alexander BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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I am a new bird, an un-hatched egg,
Ready to explode and crack open,
Fighting to peep out and see the light.
I am the lightning bugs flying in the dark,
Flashing, and bringing excitement.
I am the flow of the ocean,
Mixing, moving, and churning.
Then everything flows out with the tide.


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on Mar. 31 2010 at 11:55 am
This was super awesome!! You're such a good poet!

on Mar. 23 2010 at 11:33 am
VoiceOfStars BRONZE, Elcentro, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagination overpowers knowledge" <33

Amazing. Very touching and has so much meaining

on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:59 pm
bostonredsox1888 BRONZE, Londonderry, New Hampshire
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the metaphors were a great idea; and then how you described what you were in the metaphor. it was great and inspiring

on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:19 pm
Amy Alexander BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Thanks a lot for all the great comments. I'm really glad everyone is enjoying this piece!

on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:00 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

This is really good, i really like the slant rhyme and how its short and sweet, but with so much depth. Really amazing, five out of five

on Mar. 21 2010 at 10:28 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

very nice metaphores!!!!

this is an awesome poem!

on Mar. 20 2010 at 7:20 pm
"Nothing becomes every shining thing"

have you read that book? I can't rememebr what it's called

on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:33 pm
DelightfullyDAZED PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
~Our arms start from the back because they were once wings
~ suppose shes a wildflower
~i am free of all predujice, i hate everyone equally

i like how you used metaphors to describe yourself

on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:32 pm
DelightfullyDAZED PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
25 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Our arms start from the back because they were once wings
~ suppose shes a wildflower
~i am free of all predujice, i hate everyone equally

i love the way you use the metaphors to describe yourself like that, very good

on Mar. 19 2010 at 6:01 pm
deardiary BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is a truth universally acknowedged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. -Pride and Prejudice

luv the metaphors


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