Waiting on a Fairy Tale

March 4, 2010
By Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow


They talk about fairy tales
Prince Charming and Cinderella
We both smile, each of us only wishing
When the truth is:
When my world’s crashing down
When my sun is burning out
When all those stars come falling
You will be the one who holds me
You’re the one who keeps me sane
I never want you to leave
I want our happily ever after
I know this feeling will never go away
Every word you speak
Brings me happiness
Every time you whisper in my ear
I can’t help but smile
The light at the end of my tunnel
Is finally coming into view
It’s bright and beautiful
It just has to be you
So, if hoping for fairytales
And wishing on stars
Is what we have now
Just imagine the future
We just have to make it through
We just have to keep it going
Everything will fall into place
All we have to do is wait


The author's comments:
Sometimes waiting is worth it. <3

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on Sep. 2 2011 at 11:31 pm
thelibrarian BRONZE, Longville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
men are like steel, if they lose thir temper, they lose thier worth











-chuck norris

i liked it but it wasn't what i expected from the title

Kyria said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 8:18 am
Kyria, Gretna, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"It was an act, see even the best actors can be tricked." - Caravan of Mishaps

I really like this piece, I like how you put sort of a repetition, to emphasize the point your getting across (poems seem to do really good with that sort of stuff).  Such as: "We just have to make it through, We just have to keep it going" and the "When my world's crashing down, When my sun is burning out, When all those stars come falling"  there are a couple other examples in the poem too, but those just helped me get across the point.  Awesome work, keep writing!

Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:19 pm
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

:) thank you so much for all the comments! they made my day!!! I'm really glad you liked my work!

on Apr. 6 2010 at 4:18 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I love and really enjoyed this piece as well. The imagery and emotions come through fantasticaly


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