March 3, 2010
By , ravenna, OH
when you hit me what do you feel? or when u kick me how does it feel? when you look at me what do you see? when i look at you i see rage and control and fear strikes through me and im not sure what you gain. so tell me what do u feel and do you see and feel my fear?

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suffer guy said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 8:35 pm
this poem is very beutiful and i give it five stars. you have what it takes to be a writer im a big fan of your work and i cant wait to see what else you come up with xoxoxoxoxo
tigeress said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 6:37 pm
this poem is a very powerful message thank you for opening my eyes
WhiteTigress said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 6:09 pm
the rose is a beautiful image to go with the poem
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