March 3, 2010
By Anonymous

when you hit me what do you feel? or when u kick me how does it feel? when you look at me what do you see? when i look at you i see rage and control and fear strikes through me and im not sure what you gain. so tell me what do u feel and do you see and feel my fear?

The author's comments:
this poem is very personal and powerful to me

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suffer guy said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 8:35 pm
this poem is very beutiful and i give it five stars. you have what it takes to be a writer im a big fan of your work and i cant wait to see what else you come up with xoxoxoxoxo

tigeress said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 6:37 pm
this poem is a very powerful message thank you for opening my eyes

on Mar. 21 2010 at 6:09 pm
Midnight18 SILVER, Waddell, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"One cant live without the other"

the rose is a beautiful image to go with the poem

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