I'll wait in the rain

From the greatest sorrows to the deepest agony

From the joy You instilled in my heart to the words that ripped it in half

I don't want to think about You but i will

I cannot let this go

For all the pain that that went with it, You showed me an emotion that cannot be written

You showed me the world from a different angle

I am left standing in the rain, watching, as You leave with my heart..still beating for You

I still need you

My tears refresh my skin but do not fill the part of me you took

This is my side unseen

Do You care

These eyes weep for you

I'll wait in the rain





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CarolynQ said...
May 3, 2010 at 3:21 pm
"I am left standing in the rain watching as you walk away with my heart... still beating for you." I adore this quote i can feel myself standing there with the pain of having your heart ripped away. Keep it up you write great! :)
 
hxcRocker said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 4:34 am

I want to edit this poem but it doesn't let me so here is the revised version

 

From the greatest sorrows to the deepest agony

From the joy You instilled in my heart to the words that ripped it apart

I don't want to think of You but i will

I cannot let this go

For all the pain You put me through, You showed me an emotion that cannot be written

You showed me the world from a different angle

I am left standing in the rain watching as ... (more »)

 
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