Goldfish (the snack that smiles back)

March 1, 2010
By KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."


When we were created,
I guess God already knew about goldfish.
I guess he knew so well,
he decided to make us just like them.
God knew to make us all different colors.
God knew to make us all different shapes.
and God knew that in the end,
on the inside we would all taste the same.
He knew to package us all different
and he knew to make someone bite our heads off.
He knew to create us smiling
and give us the best shot at life.
But guess he forgot what would happen
when the package is opened.
I guess he forgot about the pretzel goldfish
and the flavor blasted goldfish
who think they are better and
richer than the rest.
I guess us traditional goldfish, God knew,
would stay in or normal bags on the shelves.



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on Mar. 31 2010 at 2:35 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."

lol omg, did u have a teenink thing before u commented or nahh lol

on Mar. 29 2010 at 7:37 pm
GangsterliciousThug... BRONZE, Neptune, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont lose wahtt yuu kno...trying 2 figure out wahtt yuu dont kno...

lolz!..........................!

on Mar. 29 2010 at 6:03 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."

omgg yess i sooo was. im tired as anythingg lol yoo lemmi txt u haha

on Mar. 29 2010 at 6:01 pm
GangsterliciousThug... BRONZE, Neptune, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont lose wahtt yuu kno...trying 2 figure out wahtt yuu dont kno...

hehe! yeahh...i heard yuu waz knocked in class...!

on Mar. 29 2010 at 2:31 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."

ohhh chanelle!! lol thnkss sooo much. wen chelsea like sed sumthin to me i was like umm.. u kno my name?! lmao

on Mar. 29 2010 at 12:13 pm
GangsterliciousThug... BRONZE, Neptune, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont lose wahtt yuu kno...trying 2 figure out wahtt yuu dont kno...

that waz me the first tyme as Hysteric C.S. 4 sum odd reasonn i cantt use it anymre...soooo now this the new 1...(evenn tho the first one waz new...) hehe! love it tho...!

on Mar. 29 2010 at 8:54 am
HystericC.S. BRONZE, Neptune, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
dont lose wahtt yuu kno...trying 2 figure outt wahtt yuu dontt kno...

hehe...i love this...! wenn i first read it in class...i almost lost it...hehe! ily gurl...!




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