London Bridge

February 28, 2010
By B.Mack SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
B.Mack SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Yes, we can"


Tall, really tall
When standing on it you feel
the air cutting into your skin
The water is dark
like a night sky
The sky is blue
like the ocean water
when the sun shines through
When on it
I feel small


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Cutter said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 12:27 pm
IT WAS FREAKING AWSOME!!!!

on Apr. 22 2010 at 5:45 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

This is really good! I love how you use really simple words to make such a powerful poem. Only talented poets can do that and you mastered it. When I first read the title, I thought you would do a play off the little kid song called London Bridge. Either way I loved it. Nice work. Check out some of my work, too if you'd like. Keep writing!


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