London Bridge

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Tall, really tall
When standing on it you feel
the air cutting into your skin
The water is dark
like a night sky
The sky is blue
like the ocean water
when the sun shines through
When on it
I feel small





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Cutter said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 12:27 pm
IT WAS FREAKING AWSOME!!!!
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 5:45 pm
This is really good! I love how you use really simple words to make such a powerful poem. Only talented poets can do that and you mastered it. When I first read the title, I thought you would do a play off the little kid song called London Bridge. Either way I loved it. Nice work. Check out some of my work, too if you'd like. Keep writing!
 
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