The Plastic Rose

February 26, 2010
He handed me a rose,
I held it in my hand,
Only to realize it was plastic.

Looking down at the rose,
I realized something,
Not only was the rose fake,
Our love had been fake too.

With him still standing there,
I threw the rose on the ground,
Stepped on it and walked away,
Leaving behind the rose and our love.





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Shahed said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 7:48 pm
He could've meant it in another way ..
based on a real story? -- I like ur words
 
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:10 pm
Thanks... Yeah, the rose was just a kind gesture to the girl, but something in her mind clicked.. She realized not only was the rose she was holding in her hand fake, so was their so called "love."
 
Milo! said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 3:32 pm
I really like the conection between the girl and the rose, even though they are two completely different things.
 
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:12 pm
Thanks. I wanted the connection to be seen, so I'm glad it got the point across.
 
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 7:42 pm
i like this alot, u can feel the strong emotionz building up inside the narrator. gr8 job
 
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:13 pm
Thank you, Dahlin'
 
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