Lovely Dream

February 25, 2010
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Tasting those smooth lips, breathing in your irresistible scent..

And as they kiss, they dream..
Blocking out all of reality and avoiding the elements,
Fire, Ice, Earth, Wind, all blocked out as they drift into their eternal, passionate, dream.


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Moonbeam13 said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 5:54 am
This poem is very beautiful.:)
DreamerForever said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 10:15 am
Simple and beautiful! Great job!
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:05 pm

I LOVE THIS! It's very passionate and delicate. Beautiful. Keep on writing...I'm a big fan.

If you have time, please check out my work. Comments and ratings are GREATLY appreciated.

                          ---Shernay B.

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