Jellyfish Kisses

February 25, 2010
By FondduLac BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
FondduLac BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love somebody, let them go, for if they return, they were always yours. And if they don\\\'t, they never were." -- Khalil Gibran


Your eyes are stained glass green
On a blue sky Sunday morning

Your heart beats a sermon and
I would love to sing a gospel accompanied
By your organs

Hallelujah

Let me turn your wine into water
We can drink until we turn translucent
And our blue blood cheeks
Begin to look like jellyfish

Electric tentacle tongues
This is only how we kiss
With enough sparks to numb our lips
Halwayouya

Lets kiss ourselves stupid
Until we can't find our tongues
Lets kiss until our lips bruise

Then lets lace our fingers so tight together that
They lock
And kiss some more until
the shocks make our hearts stop

And when our Energy moves on
To heaven or wherever
I can be comforted by the thought that
We will go there together



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on Mar. 23 2010 at 2:48 pm
MissFaber SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing Less.

dont remove the last line!!! its the perfect way to end the poem. you don't find many poems about kissing, and i really liekd this one!

plz comment and rate my stuff? thanks!

on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:49 pm
FondduLac BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love somebody, let them go, for if they return, they were always yours. And if they don\\\'t, they never were." -- Khalil Gibran

This is my own work. I dont really like the last verse. I feel like its too obvious, too abstract. Could I do with out it? any suggestions?


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