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Wishing i could

February 24, 2010
By breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
29 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
'My heart is like a blackhole, It has no dark end.'


My world used to be,
Dark, scary,
And lonely.
Until one day,
I found him.
He brought his light,
Into my world.

Brightening my darkness,
Scaring away the scary,
Leaving behind the lonelyness.
He saved me,
From the demons.
They almost consumed me,
They almost took me away.

He's light,
Brightens my world.
My world gets brighter,
More and more,
Each day.

When i'm with you,
I feel complete.
When we're apart,
I feel empty.
When i'm alone,
I think about you,
I think about us.

Wishing i could,
Be with you.
Wishing i could,
Hold you so.



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on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:58 am
breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
29 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
'My heart is like a blackhole, It has no dark end.'

thanks and i will check them out

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 5:44 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

This is good! I like how you shortened your sentences until you were to the end... well done! Keep writing and check out my work too:-)

on Mar. 12 2010 at 6:24 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
8 articles 2 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

Nice :) I love it. He's one spcial boy. [Remember not in the halls]

on Mar. 9 2010 at 10:33 am
blankpages12 BRONZE, Redding, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you put up walls not to keep people out but to see who cares enough to break them down."

that is woahh great..i love it