Once Upon

February 22, 2010
By Tigerlily11 GOLD, South China, Maine
Tigerlily11 GOLD, South China, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
It is not what i want but what i need

Once upon
Once upon a time ago
I lay there wit my head on the ground
and I just look up in the sky
All of a sudden I see you
You come up to me and ask
May I lay with you
and I of course say you may
Once upon that very day
We start to chat
and you tell me that you like me
and I say you like me???
and than goes the question
Will you go out with me
and I say yes
Once upon a time
We went to school and the very day
you kiss me on my cheek
and I say what is the for
And you say that is for everything
Once upon that very evening
We are laying in that same spot and than all of a sudden your heart
just stops
Once upon a time
We have to lay you down
and I have to forget about you
and I can't you are always are on my mind
Once upon a day ago
The doctor comes and tells me that you had
lung cancer
and I wish that I could be with you
Once a upon today
I hope that you will ask me out because I don't want
this to happen
and like most fairy tales
Once upon a time does not always work but I can always hope
Once upon a time
will sometimes work

The author's comments:
When I was a kid, I would listen to my dad tell me Fairy tales and they always had Once Upon.... and i decided to write it but not when it worked out because that is not reality

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Challaoopa said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:33 am
Challaoopa, Orlando, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Live for tomorrow because today you need something to do"

This is really nice. I like the way it moves and how the words flow.


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