Hang On

February 20, 2010
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Life is like a rollercoaster ride
There are flips
There are turns
There are twists and,
There are loops.
Life is like a big game
There are interceptions
There are fumbles
There are fouls and,
There are goals.
Life is like war
There are losses
There are gains
There are fights and,
There are treaties.
Life is a wild ride
And all you have to do is
Hang on and,
Never let go.





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bluemoonjts said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 11:38 pm
great insight, great writing. i am so proud.
 
grasshopper said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:47 pm
I'm not surprised, you have honest feelings and are apparently comfortable expressing them.... a good way to be..........
 
matt said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 1:45 pm
Outstanding job Matt. I am very proud of you ability to express the obvious.
 
matt replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 1:47 pm
Sorry, I meant "your."
 
Don said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:21 am
A very well done poem, with ingenious use of lines and endings. Bravo!
 
loua said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 7:20 am
Great job, love how the poem flows.
 
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