Suffer the World

February 19, 2010
By TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’


Suffering and the pain
Torture in the rain
Can't take this again

Look in my eyes
Watch me as I cry
Watch me as I die

Feel these tears
Take these fears
This pain is clear

Take it away
Right now, today
Be my only way

Suffer the world
For this tortured girl
Jesus, suffer the world
For me



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TheJust ELITE said...
on May. 31 2010 at 8:57 am
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

thank you!

on Mar. 20 2010 at 12:43 am
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

I think this message is strong for how short the poem is. I also like the rhyme scheme very much :)


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