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Michael

February 19, 2010
By meganiscooler GOLD, New Kingston, New York
meganiscooler GOLD, New Kingston, New York
17 articles 3 photos 13 comments

If perfection took a human form,
I'm sure it would be his.
With lips like nitrous oxide,
leave me crazy when we kiss.
An embrace just like a freight train,
knock the breath right out of me
and keep me always wanting more,
his touch a neccesity.
And if the stars could melt down-
fall, graceful, from the skies-
made golden in the sunlight, those stars would be his eyes.


The author's comments:
It's cliche to the point of being ridiculous, but sometimes the best words are recycled ones. Enjoy.

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on Mar. 18 2010 at 5:52 pm
meganiscooler GOLD, New Kingston, New York
17 articles 3 photos 13 comments
thank you thank you thank you!

on Mar. 18 2010 at 5:39 pm
HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.

An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind.

wow when i read this one word came to mind: true love. the metaphors of this are FANTASTIC and the imagery is WOW! keep up the awesome work! im looking forward to reading more of your work!

on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:46 pm
meganiscooler GOLD, New Kingston, New York
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thank you so much! I'll be sure to check out yours, too

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:31 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

wow, i've been looking on this website at the poems that come after mine and some of the ones that my friends wrote. and you know what? this is the best one i've heard yet. i'm giving this 5 stars and im thinking about adding it to my favs. it rhymed w/o sounding corny and i didn't think it was cliche, it described how you feel and i thought it was very clever. loved it!! keep writing and check out my poems too!!


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